Monday, December 11, 2006

Unlimited-Ammo: Problem Solved!

Heres a new Unlimited-Ammo! This is the first time I used "comic style" formatting and I had no idea how intuitive it is. Just reading the first chapter of Scott McCloud's 'Making Comics' helped out so much. I'm only on chapter two right now.

Nick Gibbons lent me this idea so I really gotta give him the kudos for the idea. He even helped with the dialogue! Another person who was extremely helpful was Jake Parker. He pointed me in the direction of Making Comics and Panel Discussions and also critiqued my layouts. It would look completely different if he hadn't given me some wisdom.

Here are some of the initial layouts...

First crappy layout of the comic. Click for a bigger view.
Second less crappy layout after the notes Jake and Nick provided me with. Click for big.
Final not-so-crappy approved layout! Yay! Click to become big.

7 comments:

  1. Thanks for showing your process. It is always great to see how an artist goes from idea to page. . . even if the artist is my 'tard brother.

    Cheers.

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  2. Just kidding about the 'tard part. You are a good brother. . .

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  3. YER DEAD TO ME, COMICSUBZ!!!

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  4. shotguns are highly inaccurate, but still AWESOME... its the only gun I ever use for killing people... uh... I mean zombies.

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  5. You need a chainsaw gun in your comic Tom. It's the most effective way to get an instant kill. That or a sticky grenades. Wait maybe I'm playing too much GeOW.

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  6. Very Nice Mr. Saville. I do believe you are quickly becoming a threat that I must eliminate. Welcome to the bigtime!

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  7. Thanks Dr Scribbles. See how I changed up your Mr to EH FORGET IT! See ya soon hopefully, brotha. :)

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